Idea for a story I'm thinking of writing?

[shane_hallawa]

I have an idea for a story with a role reversal on the "guy doesn't call girl after sex" idea. Here's my premise:

A guy meets a girl from school he hasn't seen in a while and he's started to be attracted to. They get reacquainted through a mutual friend but one night while at a club the girl gets drunk and begins coming on to him. The guy doesn't resist and they end up having a one-night stand. After that the guy wants to start a relationship with her but she keeps avoiding him and is really uncomfortable with the whole situation. He ends up obsessing over her.

Any thoughts or suggestions? Thanks.

 

[keithotzkie]

I dont like the part about the guy being obsessed with the girl..
I guess its just ok if the guy still tries his best to win the girls heart but not to the point where he is obsessed... I should suggest that the girl will get pregnant and that baby would be the starting point of their relationship.. The guy will do anything for his baby and because of these, the girl will fall for him once again.. :3_3_21[1]: