Katarinae1
New member
- Nov 25, 2011
- 0
- 0
- 0
I want to write a story about a girl who was abused when she was a toddler and her father was the abuser. He punched her in the head so she lost her memory. would that make sense? would a child, maybe 2 years old die if tht happened? is this okay for the first paragraph? im only 12 years old so its not that good.
As I lay comfortably, sprawled out on my bed, I ceased to remember my precious childhood. When I was just a miniscule part of this world, only an innocent toddler, something terrible had happened. All I remember of that horrid night was just a blur. I can only remember my entire body teeming with pain. My head was damaged the most and I can recall crying for my mother. Where had she gone? I still don’t know to this day.
As I lay comfortably, sprawled out on my bed, I ceased to remember my precious childhood. When I was just a miniscule part of this world, only an innocent toddler, something terrible had happened. All I remember of that horrid night was just a blur. I can only remember my entire body teeming with pain. My head was damaged the most and I can recall crying for my mother. Where had she gone? I still don’t know to this day.