Is this a good poem? I wrote it a couple years ago:P keep that in mind.?

EmmaA

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Angel Wings

If i learnt to spread my wings
and fly away up high
maybe i could finally see
how it feels to be free

i could sleep on fluffy white clouds
and live a dream like never before
and if someone asks me
how it feels to be free
i will reply with a gentle smile and say
just wait one day and you will see

*****its about death btw
its about death because it is explaining the freedom she/he feels once they passed. The hint that its about death is on the last line.
ok thanks guys for the opinions!
ill definatly change the death thing, i liked what one person said about trying to get to heaven, ill change the title too thanks:)
 
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