Is this a good story introduction?

Andy

Member
I am working on this story on wattpad:
It is called A vampire story.
Here is the introduction:
Introduction: This story concerns teens of the vampire kind, I hate to disapoint you but these vampires do not sparkle nor do they feast on any living creature with blood. Nobody is really sure how these creatures came to be, but doesn't that make the story all the more worth reading? Here in my hands I have a record of three teens that find themselves on quite an adventure after digging up a legendary vampire. What kind of curse does this bring up? Why don't you read it and find out.
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If you want to keep up with this project here is a link to my wattpad: http://www.wattpad.com/user/dragonkilla2
 

bob1

Active member
sounds pretty fucking good ! butit sortof sounds more like ablurb because of all the questions you ask and the "why dont you read it and find out"
but i think it could pass for an intro ((;
 
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