Is this haiku any good? Golden, sparkling, light. Rays of pink, orange, and

[linkette98]

blue. Shine across the sky.? If so please give me a good title. I need honest opinions.

 

[Future_Carmen]

I thought Haikus were supposed to use nature to describe deeper topics like life, death, illness, etc.

 

[DreNoahTawl]

A genuine Haiku needs to reference or suggest the season somewhere. It's okay though.

 

[keshequa87]

I like it. Call it 'Sunrise' or 'Sunset', as the case may be.