I wrote that poem and I wish you tell me what you think of it
excellent
good
just ok
weak
anything else?
ok here's the poem
Sorrowfully sits and sorrowfully weeps
Can't get what her soul needs
Her heart sorrowfully beats and bleeds
Could the reason be her bad deeds?
Will this never cease?
Oh please!
God, give her what she needs
She needs some mind peace
And peace is only dumb people's dreams
excellent
good
just ok
weak
anything else?
ok here's the poem
Sorrowfully sits and sorrowfully weeps
Can't get what her soul needs
Her heart sorrowfully beats and bleeds
Could the reason be her bad deeds?
Will this never cease?
Oh please!
God, give her what she needs
She needs some mind peace
And peace is only dumb people's dreams