I have a creative writing class for middle school students. I'm writing a 6-10 pg story on a valuable dog who belongs to an elderly couple. It means the world to them, but gets stolen. A girl who has always been close to the couple and is like their daughter goes through a lot of trouble to find it for them, Then she searches Craigslist for puppies that are on sale and the same breed as the stolen dog. She goes and sees one of the pupppies is the stolen one. She calls the police and reunites the puppy and couple. They are very grateful and they can tell the girl loves the dog, so they give the dog to her! Rate 1-10 plz! =) and also give advice on how to make the story better.