Very short poem. Any good?

[DoctorBabyhead]

I would like honest opinions, I need constructive criticism.

And so I fall into the night,
From this bright and breathless height,
From everything within my sight,
Into arms that just might.

Thanks in advance,
Emma

 

[EventHorizon]

Very interesting poem. I like the imagery...has a mysterious feel in it too!

 

[thawspace47]

i don't get it
it's okay except for
bright and breathless
and arms that just might what

 

[KelliN]

a little too short but i like it, its cool

 

[KelliN]

a little too short but i like it, its cool

 

[thawspace47]

i don't get it
it's okay except for
bright and breathless
and arms that just might what