What do you think of the love poem i wrote for my girlfriend?

KyleB

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i lover her soo much. and she loves me just as much. let me know what you think



It started out simple
like something new
I knew from the beginning
there was just something about you.

I loved the way you smiled
and the way you laughed
We were on different roads
until the roads came to one path.

When you proclaimed your love
the butterflies came
they came to my heart
and I was never the same.

We became one
at the same time we are becoming best friends
you said "Forever and always"
that’s when I knew it would never end.

And still, I never knew there would be a better tomorrow
But you've come into my life and taken away all my sorrow

My days of sadness are a thing of the past
Because I have found true love at last

My days of emptiness are gone for good
Because you fill a void in my heart that you should

You've opened a window
You've shown me the light
For, I’ve been in darkness for so long, just waiting for this light,
And now that you have come my way, my days don’t seem like nights.

I’m glad I’m finally overcome my fear of the other side,
Thank you for showing me the way, by taking me on this ride.

I’ve never really felt this way about a girl before,
You’ve truly touched me deep inside, you’ve opened, unlocked, and smashed in the door.



I saw it from the start. You’ve treated me so equally, I feel it in my heart.
And now I get to see, how great you truly are

With you I never have to guess just how you really feel,
You talk to me about the facts and tell me what’s the deal.

With you I feel so comfortable, like nothing can go wrong,
I get this tingly feeling inside, you sing to me like a song.

The fact that you are older, didn’t at all freak me out,
You treat me like I’m your age, and that eliminates all doubt.

I’m trying to live in the moment, by forgetting about the past,
And so far it’s been working, and it’s really been a blast.

Still, this love I feel for you runs deep inside,
With you I never have to hide,
You wrap your arms around me tight,
And I never feel the need to fight,
I love you more than I can say,
That love grows on as here as I say.

As you lean to kiss my head,
I think about that book I read,
The one where they had the perfect life,
The one where she grew up to be his wife,
They lived happily until the end,
I want this with you, but it won’t be pretend.

You make me feel so alive and real,
I want to tell them how I feel,
I want to tell them how it is to be,
As in love as you and me,
You make me want to scream it out,
And tell the world what our love is all about.
They will be jealous and criticize,
As we gaze into each others eyes

But really I just want you to know,
I will always let my love for you show,
Even when we are really mad,
And times are just really bad,
I'll say those three words to make it right,
So you can stay and hold me tight.

I know you are who I'd been searching for,
the reason I had stepped from the door,
you are my personal goddess to the core,
you are what I wanted/needed and more.

You, my princess, mean the world to me,
And I’m certain our love was meant to be
Cause it’s been like that right from the start
I have loved you with every beat of my heart.

So come, my princess, come and stay
Accept my heart and don’t run away
'Cause you’re my first love and you’re the last
I merely hope you understand
That, I love you like the sun in the sky
Or maybe how a bird is destined to fly
Even more than a mother loves her child
Or all the animals running in the wild

…You and me, my love, are here to stay,
…Because I would simply never have it, any other way.
 
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