I am writing an essay for a college class and I started my introduction paragraph of with
When a pet monkey no longer wants to be domesticated where do they end up? Well, let me tell you.
I don't want to submit my paper if it can't be started with a question.
I don't know how else to explain it, so I'm giving an example. This excerpt from my story got me wondering what was proper. (Faarthen is talking to Jack, just to clarify the excerpt)
"I don't know. The last thing I remember was a very long flight across water. I must have blanked out here and...
In my story, I am having trouble wording this one paragraph. Does it sound okay as it already is or does it sound too much like a Nazi handbook? Please help! Any suggestions are appreciated! Here it is:
Natural. That is the look that I am going for, and it has been that way ever since...
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YRNLq3suVwoX1DnO7YKw7RP51qCcm2QwAtO9QYjN9F0/edit
gimme some advice on how to improve it and say which paragraph is the one you edited
prompt is: Romeo and Juliet fall in love the moment they meet; they are "star-crossed," meaning that their paths have been...
(If 'HP Wombat' happens upon this, thank you for your assistance!)
You asked if I am a writer, and to be quite honest, I don't have a simple answer. I feel like a true writer when I observe life. Life contains so much essence that sometimes, it becomes overwhelming to absorb it all. It's...
TV's true violence consists not so much in the spectacle's techniques or content, but rather in the very density and speed of TV overall, the very multiplicity and pace of stimuli; for it is by overloading, overdriving both itself and us that TV disables us, making it hard to think about or even...
For english class we are writing a paper about the national spirit the author (Jon Krakauer) gives expression to in the book Into the Wild. I have written my my whole paper basically but now I want your insight on my introduction and conclusion. Is it good? Bad? How should I make it better...
here is my prompt: Rhetoric, words, and language have enormous power in the world in this novel. Big Brother understands this power, the state goes to incredible lengths to harness and influence language. Use specific examples from the novel to illustrate why Big Brother uses this. Then look at...
"Dare to Dream" is a common poster that you find plastered around the hallways of most educational institutions, it hangs there in the open as a message for bypassers to see as they stroll about the building. A simple phrase, that has been used countless of times by instructors to inspire youth...
i'm writing an essay about the book burro genius and need help on starting an introduction paragraph. please comment on any ideas or tips you may have, thank you
As Jean turned to get her luggage, she heard a familiar voice.
“Jean, stop!”
She searched the crowd, feeling a glow of happiness. There was Johnny, dressed casual in his denim pants and plain polo shirt. Running and pushing through the crowd towards her, almost tripping in his haste she didn’t...
Whats a good summary paragraph?
What would be a good summary paragraph for the novel The summer i turned pretty that explains everything that happens in that one paragraph.
THANKS(:
i did google it but it didnt work :,(
I have a habit of jumping straight into answering questions when writing essays, so could someome help me avoid this? I want to write at least one introductory paragraph that talks about World War I without just simply summarizing the answers to the questions. Here are the questions:
What were...
my topic is "how advertisements target different age groups for their product."
here what i have so far and i'm stuck:
"most of today's advertisements target different age groups for their product..." can someone help add more?