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    can somebody help me on a United states vs China Introduction paragraph

    on human rights? can somebody help me on a United states vs China Introduction paragraph on human rights? I'm having the worst time trying to get started :( i just need a general statement about their human rights .. if you can help provide an argument that'd be great bc i'm clueless on where to...
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    Is this a good introduction paragraph for an essay on 17th century punishment?

    Have you ever done something you knew deep down was wrong, but did it anyways? And after you had done it, you were called out on spot about it? Didn’t feel too great to have a secret brought to public eye did it? In the 17th century, public humiliation was one of the many consequences for...
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    The two qualities, discussed in this section, which a paragraph should have are?

    The two qualities, discussed in this section, which a paragraph should have are ?? ??
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    Can you find any mistake in this paragraph?

    Hi I am trying to write a paragraph but English is not my native language. Please, check my text for mistakes, thanks: “During the development of the Project, the Contractor shall consider the requirements of the Norm X “Safety during the Construction”, approved by DS Nº XYZ on May 8 2000, of...
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    Introduction paragraph on trench warfare research paper, need help with it.?

    can somebody give me an idea how can i make that introduction? or an examples
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    How good is this introduction paragraph? How old do you think I am judging on this...

    ...paragraph? I was running, fast. Dashing through the trees as I tried to reach safety. Every step seemed to take me two steps back. As I ran away I was really just running back. I tried running with my back towards me destination, this did not help. Gravity seemed intent on bringing me to my...
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    How do i start my introduction paragraph on my research paper?

    I'm writing a research paper about autism and I need a good introduction paragraph. What's a good attention getter or something that I can use to start this paper? Thankss~
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    Need help writing an introduction paragraph?

    my essay is on the novel The Lord of the Flies by William Golding and the topic is....trace the symbolism of the conch through the novel, showing how the shell is invested with power and how that power is destroyed i need help writing a introduction paragraph !
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    whats should i put in my introduction paragraph?

    the essay is about: comparing any ancient cities i have with modern ones and decide whether the positive aspects of modern life outweigh the negative ones. and what kind of thesis statement should i put in it?
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    CAN YOU EDIT MY 4 SENTENCED PARAGRAPH?

    Can you please help me edit this: On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the...
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    CAN YOU EDIT MY 4 SENTENCED PARAGRAPH?

    Can you please help me edit this: On the field, a soccer player should always be ready. They should have the ability to perform the basic skills. They should have the strength to follow all the main expectations needed in a game . If a soccer player knows everything they need in terms of the...
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    how to start a new paragraph in Blackberry storm while composing SMS?

    wen i press the "enter" button in the bottom right of the keyboard.................it sends the SMS instead of changing paragraph.... I know there is a way to disable it but cant remember.,,please help. its a blackberry storm 1
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    Is this a good introduction paragraph for my science fair research paper?

    tell me how i can make it better? In the race to find the next fresh new source of electricity, a healthy alternative for the earth and all its inhabitants is sound. Sound does not leave behind damaging gas or waste products. Sound waves are just pressurized air being pushed and pulled. Another...
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    Is this a good introduction paragraph for my science fair research paper?

    tell me how i can make it better? In the race to find the next fresh new source of electricity, a healthy alternative for the earth and all its inhabitants is sound. Sound does not leave behind damaging gas or waste products. Sound waves are just pressurized air being pushed and pulled. Another...
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    Is this a good opening paragraph to my horror story ?

    She was beautiful. Her long blonde hair flowed past her broad shoulders and outlined her pretty face, her pretty pale face. Her eyes were open; they were big with the word fear written all over them. I wanted her. I carefully stepped over her lifeless body, picked it up and chucked it in the...
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    whats a good introduction paragraph for my essay?

    i am writing an essay about a fashion school (FIDM). trying to persuade my readers to attend it. but i need an eye catching intro. any ideas???
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    Can someone help me start the introduction paragraph to my research paper?

    I don't know how to start it. I always suck at intros. My paper is about how William Bradford, John Winthrop, and Thomas Morton describe Puritans. I need an attention getter and then ideas of what to say after that... I don't even have a thesis sentence. Any help is appreciated. Thanks! That's...
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    i need help on a introduction paragraph on education personal goals and

    financial aid! Please help? what are some good introduction paragraph using my education personal goals and financial aid needs, what are some examples I could use in my paragraph
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    can anyone give me an introduction paragraph for video games and violence?

    i need an introduction paragraph for a speech i am doing on how video games do NOT promote violence please even a start will help pionts for best answer please help me it needs to be for a persuasive essay..so no i, you please
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    Introduction paragraph? Help please.?

    Okay I'm really bad at starting essays off & catching everyones attention. So this essay is on Comparison and Contrast Julius Caesar from movie and play. Help me make a introduction paragraph? please.
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