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  1. T

    is this an interesting first paragraph?

    i want it to be sudden. I heard the screams first. Then the sound of laser beams being fired, kind of a high pitched drone. Then I smelt the blood, blood of humans and dogs. I grabbed my rifle and looked out the window, I saw androids shooting, and burning, in other words, destroying my town. I...
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    Help with introduction paragraph !I WILL GIVE A 20% OFF COUPON TO THE BEST...

    ...ANWSER!!!!!! see more info? Science... Address the following topics: What are cells? Who coined the term? Explain how the cell theory was developed and the scientists involved. What are organelles? Make the final sentence of the first paragraph a THESIS statement. This is a sentence that...
  3. M

    What are some ideas of how to start a good introduction paragraph on Teen Pregnancy?

    trying to finish up my research paper and also a good conclusion paragraph
  4. M

    i need help writing a an introduction paragraph and thesis for my essay

    on a Caribbean mystery can u help? my teacher wants us to write about a scene in the story but she doesn't want us to retell the story can u please help me my essay is due tomorrow and i suck at english.
  5. C

    Would this paragraph be an interesting hook for a college professor?

    This is an UC application personal statement essay. I already written my first essay and this will be my second essay. Prompt: Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution, or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you...
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    Can anyone give me an example of a self introduction paragraph that includes?

    height,weight,hair/eye color,ethnicity and contact information(it also includes my interests and personality but i think i"ve got the correct placement for that).I'm just a little confused on where in the paragraph i would put all of that information and an example paragraph would be a BIG...
  7. M

    Opinions of my opening paragraph?

    Okay, I know it describes her first, and I've never done this kind of beginning before, but yeah, please critique it THOROUGHLY. I don't mind. Thanks! :D Her honey blonde hair cascaded in loose ringlets down to her shoulders, caressing her skin. Blue eyes shone with amusement and the topaz...
  8. M

    Opinions of my opening paragraph?

    Okay, I know it describes her first, and I've never done this kind of beginning before, but yeah, please critique it THOROUGHLY. I don't mind. Thanks! :D Her honey blonde hair cascaded in loose ringlets down to her shoulders, caressing her skin. Blue eyes shone with amusement and the topaz...
  9. S

    Determine from paragraph below if there are any questions of fact, prediction,

    policy, or value.? A new liberal divorce law has come up for discussion in the state senate. Senator Smith, who introduced the bill, has lobbied hard for it because she has found evidence to suggest that rather than deterring divorce, complications in the current law only result in lengthy...
  10. S

    Determine from paragraph below if there are any questions of fact, prediction,

    policy, or value.? A new liberal divorce law has come up for discussion in the state senate. Senator Smith, who introduced the bill, has lobbied hard for it because she has found evidence to suggest that rather than deterring divorce, complications in the current law only result in lengthy...
  11. M

    introduction paragraph on the democratic party?

    im writing an essay and i don't know how to start my introduction, im writing about education, immigration and terrorism/war. can anybody help me?
  12. Z

    Can someone please help me write an introduction paragraph for my essay on

    animal cruelty? i need to write an essay on animal cruelty. i pretty much have everything in mind about what to say i just can't get a good hook inspiration D: please help me! <3
  13. C

    Is this a good introduction paragraph?

    This is for my college personal statement essay. Please help me get it better! Prompt #1: The world I came from (my family, friends, and neighborhood) and how the world shaped my dreams and goals. My dad use to tell me that writing is just another, different language that I will have to use...
  14. S

    Good way to start introduction paragraph about two topics?

    im doing two topics witchcraft and ufo sightings and i want to talk about both in my research paper how can start off by doing that
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    is this a good introduction paragraph?

    Matrimony is a major commitment in an individual’s lifetime. Whether the person marries over convenience or out of love for the significant other, there’s always a related outcome. Anne Bronte defines in her novel Agnes Grey, a coming of age story involving a young woman and the unique...
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    Do you like this introduction paragraph ? :) (click!)?

    This bar was hell raised to Earth. Everything about the place left my heart pounding, as if someone was about to snatch me and drag me into the darkness, pin me against the wall and tie me until I was powerless and kidnapped. Themed back to the late 1800s, the bar’s counter was made of stone...
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    How to write a good introduction paragraph based on Chaucer's Ideas about Feudalism?

    I am writing an introduction paragraph for my English class. The prompt for the essay is 'Based on Chaucer's prologue and tales, what is his opinion on feudalism?' For my hook I am using the quote "We take it for granted we know the whole story- We judge a book by its cover and read what we...
  18. JayJ1

    Review my paragraph please$@%#$#?

    PLEASE REVIEW MY PARAGRAPH AS IT SONDS HORRIBLE FOR A JUNIOR>>> As a freshman, I participated in the All-State 9/10 Orchestra. It was such a phenomenal experience, that I still remember every moment of it. I am planning on doing All-State throughout my High school years. It was an honor to...
  19. JayJ1

    Review my paragraph please$@%#$#?

    PLEASE REVIEW MY PARAGRAPH AS IT SONDS HORRIBLE FOR A JUNIOR>>> As a freshman, I participated in the All-State 9/10 Orchestra. It was such a phenomenal experience, that I still remember every moment of it. I am planning on doing All-State throughout my High school years. It was an honor to...
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    Can someone critique my paragraph on what the story the Lorax represents?

    The assignment read Duiscuss the message of this video Be sure to mention each of the following and explain what or who they represent : the once-ler, Once-ler's relatives, Lorax, swanee swans, Brown Barbaloots, hummy fish, Truffula trees, small boy. In your assignment answer the following...
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