How can i make my introduction paragraph better?
I am writing a Fiction Inventory on a detective that finds what his heart most desires. People tell me that i should make it more engaging so far i have this...
It was a cold windy night in New York City. There was the best detective in town...
How can i make my introduction paragraph better?
I am writing a Fiction Inventory on a detective that finds what his heart most desires. People tell me that i should make it more engaging so far i have this...
It was a cold windy night in New York City. There was the best detective in town...
How can i make my introduction paragraph better?
I am writing a Fiction Inventory on a detective that finds what his heart most desires. People tell me that i should make it more engaging so far i have this...
It was a cold windy night in New York City. There was the best detective in town...
...a Mockingbird? Im writing about the bird motif-- mockingbirds, blue jays, and finches. My theory is mockingbirds symbolize the typical racist white people, blue jays symbolize the targeted color people, and finches symbolize the innocent non racist people. The opening quotation I'd like to...
Lonny wrote this paragraph. Explain why it is not well developed.
I am enrolled in college for several reasons. First, I want to get an education. An education is important for all Americans. Second, I want to find a good job after college. My last job was at a fast food place, and I hated it...
I'm writing an essay based on my favorite product. I chose LEVI JEANS. I have my three reasons (the body) and the conclusion all figured out, but I haven't gotten the introduction. I have my thesis statement, but I don't know what else to say. I understand that I should grab the readers...
"Most girls are interested in movies about fashion, musicals, and love stories; and believe me I am too, but the movie that I viewed this semester really introduced me to a new level of interest that I have. The movie I viewed this semester was “Back to the Future” directed by Robert Zemeckis."...
If we open any recent book on the origins of religion, we find that there is one point on which all authors are in agreement. They all agree in saying that religion arose in the world out of fear. Primitive forest-dwelling man feared thunder and lightning, darkness and storms, and various things...
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Mrs. B was lovely. There was no other way to describe her. She is much loved as a teacher, and much desired by the male teachers. There was one in particular; a man named Mr. F. Mr. F was odd. There was also no other way to describe him. He was distinctly…different… He wandered...
okay so i have to write a paragraph in spanish that is at least 5 sentances
-intro (name and age)
-3 things i like to do
-3 things i do not like to do
help? maybe can someone type out the paragraph and show me where to enter everything like my name, age, likes, etc...???
um to the first person...
I'm getting ready to write a persuasive essay on Why I feel the President of the United States should have some sort of military background in order to be successfully and adequately lead this country. Any ideas on how my Introduction paragraph should go? Maybe some ideas on what my thesis...
I edited and reedited my paragraph but still want to hear from someone else. Please read my paragraph and tell me what to change to make it better. And also please check my MLA citation. THANKS IN ADVANCE! Here is my paragraph and citation:
d'Lacey, Chris. The Fire Within. New York: Orchard...
In my English class we were given the assignment to write an exciting and interesting introduction to our partners. My partner is quite boring & I'm having trouble coming up with something. He even said his interesting fact was that "I don't like to talk a lot". He has a twin sister & an older...
The Russians fought long and hard for an equal, communist nation. The price was high and millions perished but in the end Russia survived. Russia went through many tragedies in the 19th century including World War I, the two-part Russian Revolution, and the Russian Civil War. The Russian...
“Hope- hope in the face of difficulty. Hope in the face of uncertainty. The audacity of hope!” The words of Obama are an inspiration. He’s a great man who listens to what the people want for a greater America; a man that has high hopes and shows true confidence in what he believes in. I absorbed...
When life gives you lemons… make lemonade. That’s what my dad always tells me when I’m stuck in a crappy situation. But to be honest, I don’t think that advice will work this one out. It feels as if I’ve been given rotten lemons, with no juice left in them, and there is just no point in making...
I'm writing on a controversial issue and I have to either be opposed or for the issue, and I wanted to know that in my introduction to the issue should I be speaking in a neutral standpoint, until I get to my thesis, or is it okay for me to state why I'm for it, and also put opposing viewpoints...
I dont know how to enter a new line/paragraph when on facebook on my phone. Even if I choose Full Screen Keypad the enter button won't work for some reason :( any advice please?
This is a bit of my chapter two and i think it sounds good, but i want a second opinion. i want to know how i could make it better, like by adding more detail. Could you please give me feed back on how you would improve it. and which bits i should change. as im stuck as to where i can make it...