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Okay, I just started writing this within the last 10 minutes. I just wanted to know if it's well-written, and a good place to start a story. I know it's INCREDIBLY short, but does it pull you in? Do you want to read more? If you have any critisism, don't fail to tell me :) Thanks! : The...

I dreamed that I was playing a video game. The opposite team was building stuff instead of attacking. I peacefully joined in and they didn't attack me. I got bored so I decided to actually play the game so I killed a few people. Someone from the other team tried to chase me out but I ended up...

I dreamed that I was playing a video game. The opposite team was building stuff instead of attacking. I peacefully joined in and they didn't attack me. I got bored so I decided to actually play the game so I killed a few people. Someone from the other team tried to chase me out but I ended up...

I dreamed that I was playing a video game. The opposite team was building stuff instead of attacking. I peacefully joined in and they didn't attack me. I got bored so I decided to actually play the game so I killed a few people. Someone from the other team tried to chase me out but I ended up...

I dreamed that I was playing a video game. The opposite team was building stuff instead of attacking. I peacefully joined in and they didn't attack me. I got bored so I decided to actually play the game so I killed a few people. Someone from the other team tried to chase me out but I ended up...

I dreamed that I was playing a video game. The opposite team was building stuff instead of attacking. I peacefully joined in and they didn't attack me. I got bored so I decided to actually play the game so I killed a few people. Someone from the other team tried to chase me out but I ended up...

This is the opening scene to my story, please comment on it, and point out any mistakes. Also does it make you want to read more? Why, or why not. Thanks BB :) The light of the full moon was shining down on her. Everywhere around her people were in different states of undress, preparing for the...

I have to write a response paper on a debate, I'm not really sure what to say in the introduction paragraph.

Please change some of the words and sentances to transform this paragraph from a grade C to an A. It is part of a story which I wrote for school. Within minutes, the sound had gone from unbelievably loud to quiet. The wind whistled, but it wasn’t strong. Thing’s had changed rapidly within...

Yes, I know I should do my own homework, but I'm in a huge crunch for time, and I realllly could use some help.

global warming? Global warming is the increase of average temperature on Earth. It’s an issue that affects everyone, human’s actions can help us fight it or make matters worse. Like Arnold Schwarzenegger once said “We simply must do everything we can in our power to slow down global warming...

My English teacher said that my introduction paragraph needed to be corrected so I tried correcting it but for some reason I can’t find the solution. Hopefully, someone in this website can help me because I really don’t know what to do. Intro Faith in any religion is a vital part of life...

global warming? Global warming is the increase of average temperature on Earth. It’s an issue that affects everyone, human’s actions can help us fight it or make matters worse. Like Arnold Schwarzenegger once said “We simply must do everything we can in our power to slow down global warming...

global warming? Global warming is the increase of average temperature on Earth. It’s an issue that affects everyone, human’s actions can help us fight it or make matters worse. Like Arnold Schwarzenegger once said “We simply must do everything we can in our power to slow down global warming...

My English teacher said that my introduction paragraph needed to be corrected so I tried correcting it but for some reason I can’t find the solution. Hopefully, someone in this website can help me because I really don’t know what to do. Intro Faith in any religion is a vital part of life...

My English teacher said that my introduction paragraph needed to be corrected so I tried correcting it but for some reason I can’t find the solution. Hopefully, someone in this website can help me because I really don’t know what to do. Intro Faith in any religion is a vital part of life...

im writing an essay about doctors. so i just need your opinion on my introduction paragraph. and it would be really nice if you gave me some more ideas or sentences i can add to it. so here it is: Doctors are the ones you turn to at times of war,disasters,injuries,and diseases.They preserve...

im typing an essay on the origins of of the cultual phenomena of LSD, marijuana, and other hallucinogens, but i have no clue what to write for my introduction paragraph and my thesis... any help?

My thesis is.. stand up for your beliefs// more or less.. I spent ALOT of time on it so I hope it's not bad >.< Standing up for what you believe in isn’t always easy. If you grew up on strict societal beliefs and values, any opposing them will stir up commotion. In Marriage Is a Private Affair...

my thesis is : Sputnik has a great impact on the world because it started the space race, gave rise to nuclear weapons, and led to the first man on the moon. i would really aprieciate it if some one really helped me and fixed my thesis if its mot clear enough THANKS <3