JessicaMontez
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Okay, so I'm writing a novel about a guy and a girl. The girl's name is Poison Sloane ( she changed her name from Carter to Poison) and she is a neglected and sexually abused eighteen year old attending an all girls academy. Her mom is a famous chef ho doesn't pay attention to her and thus does not kno that Poison's grandfather abused her from five years old until she left for school at thirteen. Her mother wants her to be a chef too, and as an act of rebellion, Poison changed her name and does drugs and has sex. She's also anorexic. She doesn't attend classes, preferring to smoke in the girls bathroom and is generally a very quiet and stoic and cool person.
THe guy who I need a name for a bit like her. His dad is a famous politician who would lock him up in the basement if he ever misbehaved or didn't get all A's in school. He attends an all boys school close to Poison's school. He's a bad boy who also does drugs, but not as hardcore as Poison. He does cut himself though. He's also cool, but a bit more outgoing. He also a bit sadistic. He has silky bleached hair ith black highlighted tips in and emo haircut and green eyes. He has a lip piercing. The two have never met despite living so close to each other, but they both get sent to a reform school where they pair up and avoid everyone else and eventually form a relationship. Together, they finally let their burdens go, when they each tell their parents what they've gone through and how they feel.
So anyways, is this plot good? And I need names that can match the guy.
I'm not really sure how to end it yet, okay? So please don't call it stereotypical. It's just the plot. I'm kinda considering killing one of them. If I do, which one? Nameless guy or Poison?
THe guy who I need a name for a bit like her. His dad is a famous politician who would lock him up in the basement if he ever misbehaved or didn't get all A's in school. He attends an all boys school close to Poison's school. He's a bad boy who also does drugs, but not as hardcore as Poison. He does cut himself though. He's also cool, but a bit more outgoing. He also a bit sadistic. He has silky bleached hair ith black highlighted tips in and emo haircut and green eyes. He has a lip piercing. The two have never met despite living so close to each other, but they both get sent to a reform school where they pair up and avoid everyone else and eventually form a relationship. Together, they finally let their burdens go, when they each tell their parents what they've gone through and how they feel.
So anyways, is this plot good? And I need names that can match the guy.
I'm not really sure how to end it yet, okay? So please don't call it stereotypical. It's just the plot. I'm kinda considering killing one of them. If I do, which one? Nameless guy or Poison?