Nov 13, 2011 #1 T Teen New member Joined Jul 3, 2008 Messages 7 Reaction score 0 Points 1 I'm writing about a guy who works as a animal rescuer and is rescuing a dog? if you don't like it any ideas?
I'm writing about a guy who works as a animal rescuer and is rescuing a dog? if you don't like it any ideas?
Nov 15, 2011 #2 T TryandTryAgain New member Joined Nov 15, 2011 Messages 2 Reaction score 0 Points 1 It's good, but I suggest you add to it in order to make it meatier.
Nov 19, 2011 #4 B BThomas1 New member Joined Nov 19, 2011 Messages 1 Reaction score 0 Points 1 not bad, might be generic, but you can make it interesting
Nov 22, 2011 #5 H hadeer New member Joined Jul 27, 2008 Messages 3 Reaction score 0 Points 1 u can say where he found teh dog and in what condition ... and that some people are after the dog because something valuable is hidden inside it and so on .. will be great ,,,, good luck
u can say where he found teh dog and in what condition ... and that some people are after the dog because something valuable is hidden inside it and so on .. will be great ,,,, good luck
Nov 23, 2011 #6 S Siri Member Joined Jun 16, 2008 Messages 44 Reaction score 0 Points 6 sounds good, and make it more interesting by having the guy get bit by a RABID dog.
Nov 24, 2011 #7 J JOSHUA Member Joined May 18, 2008 Messages 511 Reaction score 0 Points 16 maybe he tries to save the dog and he himself gets trapped in like a buliding or something while saving the dog...buid off of it? Lol good luck
maybe he tries to save the dog and he himself gets trapped in like a buliding or something while saving the dog...buid off of it? Lol good luck