Is this a good sci-fi story should something be added?

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I would rethink it sounds exactly like a movie that just came out on tv called level up about 3 guys and a girl fighting monsters that cam out of a game the boys play online and it opened a portal.
 
Is this a good sci-fi story.It's about a boy named Cody who go's and play's a virtual realty game with friend Lucas when they lose it realese a viruis because they forgot to cover up a virtual spinner which realeses content from a game when eposed for a long peroid of time.So Cody Lucas and their friend Riza must find wat to destroy the game. Should i add or take something out
Girl i never heard of it because i don't watch tv alot so o think a good twist could be is that there holograms the whole time or they get sucked in the game litrarelly
 
It's not a very good synopsis.

You can't even spell properly, let alone write a story.

Besides, do they release a virus into the computer, into themselves, or what? You need much more background information.

My advice? Save this idea for later. Read more, write more, improve your skills. A story is only as good as its writer.
 
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