GloriousEscape
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I want to do it as a comic as I'm good at them...but it might be a little complicated!
Here's the idea:
Matt is a time traveler, who can only time travel by wiping out other humans from time itself. HE NEEDS to wipe out people from time of he will die. If a person is twenty years old and he wipes that person from time, he will gain twenty years of travel time. e.g if he kills 5 twenty years olds he has 100 years and can go 100 years forward , or back into the future. So far Matt has 480,000 years in which he can go forward, or back in time. Matt is at university. He is tired of traveling in time constantly ad decided he will go to university again and live comfortably for a while. University is thriving with students to which he can wipe out to gain years, so he thinks uni is a good idea. He lives in a student house with a boy called Ray (and Edward and Chloe, who aren't important) Other students are beginning to notice Matt, he's different from everyone else and has no friends, he's not normal. Matt realizes this and befriends Ray to make himself seem more normal. After all, he is comfortable here and does not want to move away. Matt has had many human friends during his time on Earth, but Ray is the first one he has ever liked. But one day Ray catches Matt wiping someone from time...since that person has been wiped from time Ray shouldn't remember seeing this...but he does. This means Matt has to wipe out Ray from existence, but he can't do this to his first ever friend. So Ray is under oath to keep Matts secret (Ray is too scared to say anything in fear of what Matt would do to him anyway.) Matt then goes forward in time by a month (exams are this month and to avoid taking them he moves forward in time) Ray is happy to see him in the future (for Ray does wuite like him) and in his happiness, he runs across the road-and is hit by a car. Matt is upset and goes back in time to correct things...but whatever he does, Ray always seems to die on that particular day one way or another. Matt denies Fate itself and goes back in time with Ray to 1881. But the time balance is thrown, and things aren't how they should be. The gods of time visit matt and say that by not wiping Ray from existence that day he saw Matt wping someone from time, Matt denied fate. So Ray was then destined to die soon, once again Matt interfdered with time. To restore the natural balance Matt needs to wipe Ray from time.
THIS IS AS FAR AS I HAVE GOT. Any good? Should I continue? What changes would you make? Should i write it as a book, or comic?
Here's the idea:
Matt is a time traveler, who can only time travel by wiping out other humans from time itself. HE NEEDS to wipe out people from time of he will die. If a person is twenty years old and he wipes that person from time, he will gain twenty years of travel time. e.g if he kills 5 twenty years olds he has 100 years and can go 100 years forward , or back into the future. So far Matt has 480,000 years in which he can go forward, or back in time. Matt is at university. He is tired of traveling in time constantly ad decided he will go to university again and live comfortably for a while. University is thriving with students to which he can wipe out to gain years, so he thinks uni is a good idea. He lives in a student house with a boy called Ray (and Edward and Chloe, who aren't important) Other students are beginning to notice Matt, he's different from everyone else and has no friends, he's not normal. Matt realizes this and befriends Ray to make himself seem more normal. After all, he is comfortable here and does not want to move away. Matt has had many human friends during his time on Earth, but Ray is the first one he has ever liked. But one day Ray catches Matt wiping someone from time...since that person has been wiped from time Ray shouldn't remember seeing this...but he does. This means Matt has to wipe out Ray from existence, but he can't do this to his first ever friend. So Ray is under oath to keep Matts secret (Ray is too scared to say anything in fear of what Matt would do to him anyway.) Matt then goes forward in time by a month (exams are this month and to avoid taking them he moves forward in time) Ray is happy to see him in the future (for Ray does wuite like him) and in his happiness, he runs across the road-and is hit by a car. Matt is upset and goes back in time to correct things...but whatever he does, Ray always seems to die on that particular day one way or another. Matt denies Fate itself and goes back in time with Ray to 1881. But the time balance is thrown, and things aren't how they should be. The gods of time visit matt and say that by not wiping Ray from existence that day he saw Matt wping someone from time, Matt denied fate. So Ray was then destined to die soon, once again Matt interfdered with time. To restore the natural balance Matt needs to wipe Ray from time.
THIS IS AS FAR AS I HAVE GOT. Any good? Should I continue? What changes would you make? Should i write it as a book, or comic?